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Tuesday, April 30, 2013
In Class Essay 2
Sir
Philip Sydney’s “Thou Blind Man’s Mark” creates a mood of caution. It is
evident within the poem that when dealing with desire one must be careful and
strong willed. This warning of caution lets the reader know that Sir Philip
Sydney feels that desire is dangerous, evil, and a monster. His attitude
towards desire is conveyed through techniques such as structure and figurative
language.
The
structure of the poem is divided into three different parts that allows the
reader to grasp the author’s attitude effectively. Each part has a specific
purpose to address how he feels about desire. Lines 1-4 (Thou blind man’s…whose
end is never wrought) describes desire in a way that allows the reader to see
how Sir Philip Sydney feels about desire. Words such as “snare” and “web”
describe desire as a trap that one cannot easily escape. Lines 5-11 (Desire,
desire…thy smoky fire) tells the reader the effects of desire once caught in
its trap. Desire causes one to chase fruitless and unyielding dreams. It causes
one to be distracted from his or her true goal. Lines 12-14 (For virtue…how to
kill desire.) is where it tells how to deal with desire. By focusing on one
goal or reward you can overcome desire if that goal is to “kill desire”. This
three part structure fulfills the author’s purpose in letting the reader know
how he views desire has something evil and to be vanquished.
Figurative
language is actively used throughout the poem to convey the overall mood and
feel of the poem. Phrases such as “Thou blind man’s mark, thou fool’s chosen
snare” and “Thou web of will, whose end is never wrought” uses comparison to
describe desire in the views of Sir Philip Sidney. These phrases imply that
desire is a self-made trap that one does realize he or she is trapped in hence
the phrase “Thou blind man’s mark, thou fool’s chosen snare”. The phrase “Thou
web of will, whose end is never wrought” implies that since it is a “web”
created by yourself it is inescapable because you don’t realize you’ve been
caught. This use of figurative language
leads to thought that this evil entity desire born within you turns you into a
monster that has woven your downfall.
The way
Sir Philip Sidney depicts desire as an evil entity shows his true attitude
towards desire. His use of structure and figurative language builds desire as
character itself within the poem and the way he builds desire as a character lets
the reader know how he feels about desire. He sees desire as an evil entity and
an enemy that is nearly impossible to defeat unless one’s desire is to “kill
desire”.
Monday, April 29, 2013
In Class Essay 1
The Poisonwood
Bible introduces a well civilized family into a completely new and
drastic change in environment. Moving from their comfortable homes in the United
States to the hostile and extreme environment in Congo, Africa the family has
been significantly impacted on how they grow and develop. The overwhelming change
in environment pushes the characters to change and the environment itself molds
the characters as the story progresses. It’s not only the physical surroundings
and geographical surroundings, but also the cultural environment that shape the
characters throughout the novel.
The
harsh physical and geographical surroundings of the African village pushed
characters to change and come to sudden realizations about themselves. Adah, a crippled
teenager, had a dim and backward view on her life and for the most part did not
get involved with society or with others unless it was absolutely necessary.
She exiled herself from society seeing herself as not fitting in or of being
any use. Africa’s physical and geographical surroundings changed her
psychological state of mind. One day while walking with her sister a Lion
appears out of nowhere. Adah is abandoned and put into a life threatening
situation but is able to survive despite being crippled. This event causes her
to value her own life and to become not so detached from the world. It is this
event that pushes her to become a active and involved scientist. The state of
her psychological thinking was turned completely around due to her physical and
geographical surroundings.
The
cultural environment of the African village caused a character named Leah to
change her moral views. Leah at first is absolutely devoted to the ways and
views of her Christian Father. She shares all the same views and beliefs on
what is right and wrong with him. The cultural environment wears down Leah’s
faith in her father and her religion. The political and social state of Congo causes
Leah to feel compassionate towards the Congo independence movement. She falls
in love with the African culture and marries and African man. She drops her
shared moral views with her father to pursue her own moral views in justice and
freedom. The remainder of her life she fights for Congo independence.
The
extreme change in geographical and cultural surroundings has caused characters
in The Poisonwood Bible to change and
mold their psychological state and moral views.
Adah and Leah’s complete change throughout the novel illuminates the
author’s work as a whole. The introduction to an alien environment can cause
one to grow and realize who they are and what they want to do.
Sunday, April 28, 2013
Poetry Essay Question 2
Shakespeare’s
“Hamlet” clearly shows an inner conflict within the main character, Hamlet,
that tears him between two choices. His choice between live for revenge or
death is what drives the theme and plot of the play. He is often portrayed as a
mad man throughout the play as it fits his mental instability brought by these
conflicting choices. Through Hamlet’s inner conflict Shakespeare is able to
convey his theme of revenge.
Due to
a series of events Hamlet contemplates between the choice of life and death.
His father has died and his mother remarried to his uncle. He wonders if life
is still worth living and considers suicide to be an escape. He finds purpose
when confronted by the ghost of his father who reveals that it was Claudius who
murdered him. Hamlet seeks to carry out an act of revenge which gives him a
reason to live. Despite finding purpose Hamlet still considers suicide to be a
viable choice. The option of suicide gives birth to an inner conflict in
Hamlet. He could carry out his act of revenge and possibly feel inner peace at
the end or he could just end his life where he stands and be rid of his
nightmare. Hamlet’s indecisiveness leads him to becoming mentally unstable and
causes him to carry out rash actions of revenge.
The
choice of suicide is what offer Hamlet an escape which for Hamlet is an
attracting choice, but the thought of his uncle going unpunished for his crimes
drives him towards a mad plot of revenge. The looming choice of suicide is present
throughout the play. Hamlet wants to end his suffering in an instant but can’t
due to his plot for revenge. The thought of suicide clearly shows Hamlet’s
state of mental instability and Shakespeare uses this to drive the plot of the
play
Poetry Essay Question 1
This passage from The Crossing
does not give much information about the man or the wolf, only the man’s deep
feelings towards the wolf. As the man looks upon the wolf he develops great
feelings of admiration and respect. These intense feelings are conveyed to the
reader through techniques such as tone, imagery, and figurative language.
The
tone set by the passage conveys the man’s feeling of awe and praise towards the
wolf. The tone reaches a level of praise from lines 40-46 (He squatted over…running
in the starlight). The tone is so engrained into the text that it gives the reader
the same feelings. This tone is evidence of the man’s intense feelings and emotions
that he experienced through this event. These mixtures of tones shows the
impact the wolf had on the man spiritually and emotionally.
McCarthy’s
use of imagery is extremely effective in correlating the man’s emotions and his
senses. Lines 40-44 (He squatted…her bloodied forehead) shows
the man’s actions expressed in a physical form, “sat by her and put his hand
upon her blooded forehead and closed his own eyes”. The emotions expressed through his actions
shows that the man is intrigued and indulged by the wolf’s cold dead body.
The
figurative language used throughout the passage created feelings of admiration
and respect. It is the vivid descriptions of the wolf in her natural habitat
that creates these feelings. For example the description of how the coyotes
react to the wolf in lines 52-54 (Where she ran… was fear and marvel) shows how
majestic and powerful the wolf was. Lines 55-58 the wolf is compared to a
flower that eats flesh. This comparison enlightens us to the beauty of the
wolf.
To what
degree the wolf has impacted the main character is made clear through the man’s
thoughts and actions throughout the passage. The wolf enlightened the man
through her beauty and power. By using these literary techniques the author has
created a mood of admiration and respect that is reflected in the man.
Wednesday, April 24, 2013
GRIDLOCK (A Lemon by Pablo Neruda)
Meaning: Pablo Neruda is expressing the deeper layers in everyone and everything. Including a lemon. He is illustrating how as you delve deeper you find deeper meaning and more surprising things.
Antecedent Scenario: Well if I had to make an educated guess I would say that Pablo Neruda was studying a lemon to great extend before writing this poem.
Tone: The overall tone I got from "A Lemon" was admiration and passion. Now that might seem weird to have admiration for a lemon but what I believe Pablo Neruda was going for was the lemon's great qualities and how it can be applied to everyone and everything.
Agency: The main agent in this poem is the lemon. The lemon does not change throughout the poem. The lemon only gets described in more detail as the poem progresses.
Antecedent Scenario: Well if I had to make an educated guess I would say that Pablo Neruda was studying a lemon to great extend before writing this poem.
Tone: The overall tone I got from "A Lemon" was admiration and passion. Now that might seem weird to have admiration for a lemon but what I believe Pablo Neruda was going for was the lemon's great qualities and how it can be applied to everyone and everything.
Agency: The main agent in this poem is the lemon. The lemon does not change throughout the poem. The lemon only gets described in more detail as the poem progresses.
Tuesday, April 23, 2013
SEVENTH READING
So I read "A Lemon" by Pablo Neruda seven times. Honestly every time I read it I had a different insight. At first I thought Pablo Neruda was just trying to paint a vivid picture of a lemon with words and for the most part he succeeded. But by the time I got to my seventh reading I had a different view. I began to think this was talking about Earth and how the juices flowing down might be like the rain and the trees are the nipples. It is talking about how giving Mother Earth is and enriches the Earth with its nourishment.
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